I made a new rap..

I posted a while back with a new rap.. and asked for some criticism and feedback.. and after taking the accumulated advice.. ive made a new channel with all new stuff. Heres the link to the newest one.. "Pale kid raps fast" by watsky sped up 20%.. then the rest are originals.. check it out if you want.. and as always criticism is always welcome.. (Im talkin to you compella)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xphHxAac654

(skip ahead to 1:40 to skip the rambling and get to the cover)