just wrote a verse to this sick Premo beat

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KLnz_QzfaII

seen this o g sipping night train
started speaking on lifes pains
amazed at his age still sick with the knife game
provided the fuel for me to just write flames
he said i guess im what the dope game made me
1986 was MONEY, crack cocaine crazy
back then the baddest bitch lucy was his lady
puerto rican chick hair down to her but all wavy
biggest regret was letting this one go by
he had cash and cars the hoes so fly
said i cant explain it and i dont know why
but i fell inlove once i saw those eyes
finished his beer then lit up a joint
looked me dead in the face ima get to the point
never take life for granted time moves so fast
before you know it its gone in a flash a gun goes blast

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JQhI3YQVLB4

Yo this is a noodle production
about to drop rhymes of mass destruction
beat you to you cant function,
break your jaw like i was tony jaa
(then the beat changes)
you need a gas mask to be around my ass when i blast grass
the shit shit i smoke will make you feel like your beat thangs broke
and if you battle me you will choke
because i'm like a monster ripping at throat,
and remember this is a noodle production
so feel my words like a volcano eruption,
fuck talk just walk the cross walk to my block
and get poped.....
like my rocket pops on an Asian chick with no tits
who sits with her hair blowing in the wind some say thats a sin
but i begin to realize that we could all be vaporized by a bomb,
fuck it ill live on inside a cd rom
comprised of the human race and all of space
and in this place is bass for smoke demons
or maybe i just smoked till i seen them
bitch on the tracks can swallow my seamen
because this track is too dam long to flow to
so ill let the dead mobster show you!

Aikijiujitsu your rhymes aren't to bad
but sly I'm sorry those lyrics are whack no disrespect dude

hey!!!!!!!!!!!! let me join in guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Don't have a beat so just imagine one :)

Sweet Tea
Hey just the other day I went down to town, Was getting hungry and on my face was a frown.
I craved a little bit of the fried chicken combo, I got in my car and tried not to drive slow.
In to the grocery store I did run, Winked at the cashier and said "good day hun".
She was a really pretty girl around 5 foot three, But I didn't care I was rushing to get some sweet tea.
Up to the tea aisle I finally made it there, No Red Diamond Sweet Tea so I started to swear.
Then I got a tap on the shoulder, An old man begin to explain to me about Folgers.
I said "I don't want no goddang coffee", Ice in my sweet tea thats what you give me.
So the old man pointed down the floor, told me about the sweet tea behind the door.
So I thanked the man and begin to run, I've almost made it this was getting fun.
I kicked through the door and demanded my gallon, but all that was there was a fat guy named Alan.
If you want sweet tea you'll have to answer a question, I said okay Alan give me your best son.
So he asked me the capitol of the state of Kansas, I told him I didn't know but I think its Mississippi.

The end

Thanks for your contributions i appreciate it

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Originally Posted by 4site

Aikijiujitsu your rhymes aren't to bad
but sly I'm sorry those lyrics are whack no disrespect dude

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ya i know i don't even listen to rap lol

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Originally Posted by Don Blankenship

hey!!!!!!!!!!!! let me join in guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Don't have a beat so just imagine one :)

Sweet Tea
Hey just the other day I went down to town, Was getting hungry and on my face was a frown.
I craved a little bit of the fried chicken combo, I got in my car and tried not to drive slow.
In to the grocery store I did run, Winked at the cashier and said "good day hun".
She was a really pretty girl around 5 foot three, But I didn't care I was rushing to get some sweet tea.
Up to the tea aisle I finally made it there, No Red Diamond Sweet Tea so I started to swear.
Then I got a tap on the shoulder, An old man begin to explain to me about Folgers.
I said "I don't want no goddang coffee", Ice in my sweet tea thats what you give me.
So the old man pointed down the floor, told me about the sweet tea behind the door.
So I thanked the man and begin to run, I've almost made it this was getting fun.
I kicked through the door and demanded my gallon, but all that was there was a fat guy named Alan.
If you want sweet tea you'll have to answer a question, I said okay Alan give me your best son.
So he asked me the capitol of the state of Kansas, I told him I didn't know but I think its Mississippi.

The end

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is this a true story??????????

wrote it on the spot yesterday updated the verse a bit

seen this o g sipping night train
started speaking on lifes pains
hooked on heron taping his arm for the right vein
provided to fuel for me to just write flames
he said i guess im what the dope game made me
1986 was MONEY, crack cocaine crazy
aint no half stepping big daddying Kane to ur lady
had a rican chick hair down to her ass all wavy
biggest regret was letting this one go by
he had cash and cars the hoes was so fly
said i cant explain it and i dont know why
but i fell inlove once i saw those eyes
finished his beer then lit up a joint
looked me dead in the face ima get to the point
never take life for granted time moves so fast
before you know it its gone in a flash a gun goes blast

I only write raps if im really baked

I like yours Aikijiujitsu

lol i dont know man ur spitting that fire i dont want to battle

for some reason i have trouble writing rhymes about martial arts or fighting the only line i ever came up with was

you looking at a jiu jitsu killer
choke you out with gold in my mouth like mayhem miller

yeah gotta pay respect to mayhem

What's up with some audio, guys?