10th Planet Behtlehem Commercial

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RUrwK4pgEEY#t=11

Very nice!

Bookmarking for later.

Awesome !! :)

Who is the target audience? The general public? If that's the case, I would consider moving the opening cut with the d'arce to later on in the video. Without any context, it just looks like two guys are in a warm embrace to a laymen. You should start with the action shots so people know what's going on.

dope!

Dopeness

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Originally Posted by Joseph Hachey

Who is the target audience? The general public? If that's the case, I would consider moving the opening cut with the d'arce to later on in the video. Without any context, it just looks like two guys are in a warm embrace to a laymen. You should start with the action shots so people know what's going on.

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This is just for Eddie and MTS we have another one we are working on featuring kickboxing and the kids class that will also include the phone number and a week trial that will air on tv. not this rough edit obviously

Man that looks so sick

Sick!

Thumbs up!

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Originally Posted by Ryan Boor

Thumbs up!

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thanks my man!