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    Great Grappling Brazilian Jiu Jitsu
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    Check Out My New Video

    shameless self promotion to a new level.

    One of my students made this to help promote the school. It is a trial run for a little bit longer of a video (a 2 minute video). I'm looking for some constructive criticism

    Let me know what you think!

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    10th Planet Jiu Jitsu
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    Medford, OR
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    After watching eddies last video Im terrified to watch anything else
    #10thplanetFREAKS

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    Quote Originally Posted by Brent Smith View Post
    After watching eddies last video Im terrified to watch anything else
    Glad i skipped out on that one

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    10th Planet Riverside
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    Cherry Valley, Ca
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    I like that show different people hitting moves not just one person like yourself pulling everything off, it shows your ability to teach I think.

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    10th Planet Indianapolis
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    Indianapolis, IN
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    Dope!

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    Head instructor 10th Planet Mobile
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    The moment you inserted your middle and index finger forcefully yet precisely in my asshole, I knew I wanted to learn all that you could teach me.

    The promo is sick. On the real.

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    Personally I don't like music on videos of this type at all. I put music on my most recent Marcelo Garcia video ("Marcelo Garcia at Chelsea Piers") but I've made dozens and dozens of videos without music. I find it distracting and it also separates people because although we may all love JJ, we all have different tastes in music. I didn't like the music on your vid, and if I were a potential customer that might subliminally turn me off to the school. (Likewise, someone who dislikes hardcore music might be turned off to Marcelo because of my choice of music on that recent video).

    I think jiu jitsu videos work best when they focus not on the technique at the school, but rather the personality of the instructor. If you watch my Marcelo videos you learn that he is humble. If you watch my Eddie videos you see he is funny. The different personalities show through the videos and if you were trying to chose a school, you would know which instructor is best suited to your personal taste.

    I'd suggest for your next video, you try to capture your personality so people understand what the tone of the school is.

    Hope that helps...

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    Charlotte Jiu Jitsu Academy
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    Charlotte, NC
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    It sucks multiple cocks.

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    Great Grappling Brazilian Jiu Jitsu
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    Quote Originally Posted by bobby rivers View Post
    The moment you inserted your middle and index finger forcefully yet precisely in my asshole, I knew I wanted to learn all that you could teach me.
    Bobby you did pay for an experience...I felt obliged to provide.

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    10th Planet Decatur and 10th Planet Muscle Shoals
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    I like the video. It's put together well. Honestly, I'm not crazy about the music, though. Personal preference, I guess.

    Is it for TV or just for intrawebs?
    "The lockdown is not the 10th Planet gospel; an open mind is the 10th Planet gospel."
    - Amir Allam

    Please stop by and check out my site

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