10th Planet rap :P

[chronic_jiujitsu]

New 10th planet rap. all I have is a generic mic and background music offline. so it is what it is. anyway, tips/critique are welcomed (I'm talking to you compella) Thine link hath been pasted below...eth (lyrics are in the video)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sQjZ-IxCgm8

[Luke Jarvis]

Slow it down brother and don't drop n bombs

[NelsonLucca]

I'm waiting for someone to post the rap reply.

[John P]

haha nice almost as fast as busta

[Aab]

Pretty good mate but spit louder next time.

[Ron Almeida]

agree i dont like the n bombs either.

Slow it down brother and don't drop n bombs

[Luke Jarvis]

Also man don't edit your voice like that
and if that's your actual voice. My bad

[chronic_jiujitsu]

Also man don't edit your voice like that
and if that's your actual voice. My bad

haha, its my real voice but i know what youre talking about. I tried to overlap it at a few parts but it ended up sounding robotic. And no "n bombs".. got it

[Ehsan_Karam]

So let's talk about the gear used to create this.
What's in the lab C.J.?

[Compella]

Not bad, Lyricality got some potential; I'd work on delivery. Don't say nigga unless your willing to back it up in a room full of angry black men. Production is a whole different animal so I'll let DJs and producers break that down. All I can really suggest is practice, practice, practice till you find your OWN style and it will evolve on it's own if you put the time in...just like JJ