First things first... I like that kneebar from Twister Side Control.
Ok so here's what I noticed...
1. Whenever your in Twister Side, Pimp arm a leg so he can't knee you (mma block). Also its a good way to control the leg for when you want to collapse it towards you for the truck transition.
2. Throw in some more body triangles when you get the back.
3. Crossing the ankles behind the shoulder when you are in spider web. I notice you leave the feet open, this can lead to an escape. Cross the ankle on the leg that's over the body on top of the ankle on the leg that's over the face, behind (under) the far shoulder.
4. Your arm crush was reversed. It probably works I have just never seen it that way. Try throwing up the opposite leg and triangle, placing the right ankle behind the back of the head.
5. Base out with your hands more. I noticed when you were skydiving you never posted a hand to secure the position.
6. When you roll to truck. Roll like you mean it, really tuck and dive that shoulder.
Overall, good stuff. I wouldn't want to be in your truck.