Critique Please! Finally taped a couple moves

[Jarrad Mckay]

in the first vid you zombie his arm to the mat, then go to the meat hook. Why do you go to meat hook when you have the guys hands to the mat? or was that just something you did for the video. I like the second one a lot.

[Dennis Martinez]

Second one took me two tries but i got it to work yesterday rolling i could use some tweaking but definetly a good one

[Jeff Doherty]

That's just the way I do meat hook. You have a tighter hook on the other side that way... and in regards to the moves, the second one is a lot tighter position wise, but the choke on the first one is almost instant. It can be difficult to slide the shin through though

[NelsonLucca]

Love the creativity. Keep it up

[Pete Daly]

It great that your trying new things and all but with some live good partner the 2nd one would be hard to hit unless the guy is brand new..lol tweek it a little here and thier and you might have something..

Alright so, from a defensive standpoint, you would want to home alone and keep that elbow driven to the ground to prevent him from doing this, right? Then you'll probably have to get your head to the mat to keep that defensive posture, and that opens up a whole host of offense.

[Josh Smith]

Jeff, I like the second one, I'm gunna give it some play, as it looks like it would fit nicely as an option from my back armcrush/rolling arm crush series.

I thought the very same thing! I'm definitely gonna play with that second one cuz it looks like it could be a big money move. Thanks for sharing bro!

[Tim Elliott]

I have a deep emotional need to get a triangle from some weird angle. Impressed

[Justin W.]

I'm going to have to try out that triangle. It looks locked down but I'm not seeing how you can get the tap from that angle. Perhaps if you locked in the triangle and then turned over and finished like how drysdale does in this video - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YXqf0A2vnMU

[Josh Smith]

ttt

[J Grooms]

In the second one, after the sit out and trapping the arm its a perfect chance to pull off the crippler crossface! Lol