I hate to be a naysayer, but I don't think the logo is readable at all? It needs to be a vector snake, more of illustration than a Photoshop job.
I could maybe help, if you guys wanted? I def. don't want to step on any toes. I had done a layout for the "Rapists don't Box" t-shit, but was too big a pussy to finish & submit it. I think it would've won though, of course I do.